Josh Cramer
English 1000
Laurie Bailar
6/2/2016
Reflection on Revised Essay
The knowledge I had on this subject was very relatable since I have done work like this before in the past. Based on the facts that were provided in the article on how the American Dream was told to us from generation to generation. The main issue I had on this essay was the transition from point to point on the different topics I wanted to cover. The process I used it almost the same for most essays I write based on the fact that it is simple yet effective. I start with a main topic and web it out to 3 or more sub topics I want to cover, then give 3 supporting details for those topics to have a basis on them. Furthermore, the revision process is the same for example I have two peers evaluate my work, then I make corrections then to have 3 more revisions done for the final essay.
From a reader’s point of view, I feel as if they would see me as a very blunt person that doesn’t beat around the bush for facts. Just based on the case that I can say the American Dream isn’t an actual thing you can hold or touch, but it is a belief and goal in which Americans strive to achieve. The reader’s I feel like can see the flow that I use from topic to topic as I base off the main topic then slowly adding in the sub topic at the end. To then transition into the main details for that sub topic given.
English 1000
Laurie Bailar
6/2/2016
Reflection on Revised Essay
The knowledge I had on this subject was very relatable since I have done work like this before in the past. Based on the facts that were provided in the article on how the American Dream was told to us from generation to generation. The main issue I had on this essay was the transition from point to point on the different topics I wanted to cover. The process I used it almost the same for most essays I write based on the fact that it is simple yet effective. I start with a main topic and web it out to 3 or more sub topics I want to cover, then give 3 supporting details for those topics to have a basis on them. Furthermore, the revision process is the same for example I have two peers evaluate my work, then I make corrections then to have 3 more revisions done for the final essay.
From a reader’s point of view, I feel as if they would see me as a very blunt person that doesn’t beat around the bush for facts. Just based on the case that I can say the American Dream isn’t an actual thing you can hold or touch, but it is a belief and goal in which Americans strive to achieve. The reader’s I feel like can see the flow that I use from topic to topic as I base off the main topic then slowly adding in the sub topic at the end. To then transition into the main details for that sub topic given.